05 April 2009

108 Poems #085

In this space under tall trees
A cool breeze passes through
An ant meanders purposefully


[04 April 09]
Posted by Puerhan at 2:32 am
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2 comments:

PhebeK said...

Your poems are very nice! Don't you think these 3 liners are very haiku-ish (without counting syllables?).

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11:24 pm
Puerhan said...

Hi PhebeK, Thank you for your kind words! Yes they are quite similar to Haiku. I'm not sure if they strictly conform to the definition of a Haiku though, so I don't refer top them as such.

6:13 am

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