04 April 2009

108 Poems #085

In this space under tall trees
A cool breeze passes through

An ant meanders purposefully



[04 April 09]

2 comments:

PhebeK said...

Your poems are very nice! Don't you think these 3 liners are very haiku-ish (without counting syllables?).

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Puerhan said...

Hi PhebeK, Thank you for your kind words! Yes they are quite similar to Haiku. I'm not sure if they strictly conform to the definition of a Haiku though, so I don't refer top them as such.